Indonesia was hit by a 7.5 meter earthquake.Four people died and thousands of homes were destroyed.I think we should help Indonesia by donating some money.If we help them then they would help us too.
For this piece of news, you should write more of your comments. You should express more about how you feel. Are you happy or sad for them? Why? Link this earthquake to the recent financial crisis.Would you donate? What are your wishes and hopes to the victims of the earthquake in Idonesia?
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For this piece of news, you should write more of your comments. You should express more about how you feel. Are you happy or sad for them? Why? Link this earthquake to the recent financial crisis.Would you donate? What are your wishes and hopes to the victims of the earthquake in Idonesia?
Dear Mayank,
Agree with Aurora. Please put in effort to do a good job. You should at least elaborate on 3 opinions. Read other's comments to learn.
Dear Aurora,
Please do not copy my comments for Amabel.
You should put on how were the people's feelings. How do you feel about it? please put more because I can't comment much on it
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